It looks like you tested your campaign on our page, as I saw our social icons.
I think the campaign looks good, but looks too techy for my liking. An image of a motor isn't the most appealing thing I see when I go to your campaign page.
Seeing gif animations of it in action (not just youtube), more colourful surroundings - perhaps with people enjoying using it and kids too, outside of the workshop surroundings you have in your current images.
Where else have you been featured? I'd suggest having a look at Fidget Cube, perhaps the campaign page layout and wording would inspire yours.
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