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My first Kickstarter Campaign

by Taj_Crwn » Mon Jun 12, 2017 8:38 am

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/2018962264/blue-in-my-feelings

It has been an interesting journey for me to get to this point. I've gone from thinking I knew everything about what I wanted, to battling with depression, and finally realizing my dreams. My project is a debut mixtape to showcase my talent as a songwriter, poet, and artist. The project is titled BLUE: IN MY FEELINGS. I hope you will enjoy it as much as I've enjoyed creating it.
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by OptivoltLabs » Mon Jun 12, 2017 6:35 pm

Incredible!
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by Taj_Crwn » Mon Jun 12, 2017 7:15 pm

OptivoltLabs wrote:Incredible!


Thank you so much! I appreciate your comment
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by hyperstarter » Tue Jun 13, 2017 12:48 am

I think it was a guy who just wanted to raise his post count, sorry to break it to you.

If I can give my comments, visually on the campaign page there's nothing there that stands out. Your message might be important, but it should be clear and visually appealing.

There's a huge chunk of text, it needs to be broken down into sections and manageable parts.

Is the mixtape spoken word only? I think as a form of self expression, that's great - but this is Kickstarter and backers want to know the benefits of supporting you and ultimately what they are going to get in return.

Finally, you need a video. Best of luck.
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by Taj_Crwn » Tue Jun 13, 2017 1:00 am

Thank you for your advice and suggestions. I am working on adding media and videos. I am currently waiting to hear back from an artist about cover art. I'll break up my text on the page like you suggested. Also, it's not spoken word, I wrote spoken word and other poetry, but this is actual music that I'm working on.
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by Cristina » Wed Jun 14, 2017 6:18 am

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