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I just set up my Kickstarter Pre-Launch Page for my comic book series. I would like feedback from the group, if I did it right or tips on if I can make it better. I also wanted to know how long should a Pre-Launch page stay up before launching?

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/ak ... ft-issue-5

Thanks for your time

Owen

You obviously have a well developed project.
I think its a little distracting to have so much focus on the Short Film. It is relevant to mention but this Kickstarter is for a comic book so you should talk about the successes of the comic book.
Maybe get some reader testimonial, what have people loved about previous issues.
Is there a cliff hanger coming? Or being concluded?
You set up the plot but don't tell us anything about the story, has the hero made progress what are some challenges he is facing.

Just my humble opinion.
Archon's Table
www.kickstarter.com/projects/archonstable/